Rewrite a job ad to be clearer and more inclusive
Long, jargon-heavy ads put good people off. A clear ad with real requirements gets more relevant applicants. Separating must-haves from nice-to-haves, and showing the salary and working pattern, lets people judge for themselves whether to apply.
Steps
- Get the real must-haves from the hiring manager, separate from nice-to-haves, plus the salary range, location and working pattern.
- Paste the current ad, with the client’s name removed if it is confidential.
- Example (made up, for illustration only): an ad for an office manager asks for ten years’ experience, a degree and a dynamic self-starter. The hiring manager confirms the real must-haves are running payroll in a small business and managing suppliers, so the rewrite asks for those skills and drops the years and the degree.
- Run the prompt below. It marks anything that could be discriminatory with [CHECK] rather than deciding for you.
- Go through every [CHECK] item and the requirements with the hiring manager; you and they decide whether each requirement is genuinely needed for the role.
- Publish it, and keep the agreed must-haves with the vacancy file so screening uses the same list.
The exact prompt
Rewrite this job ad to be clear and inclusive. Ad: [paste]. Real must-haves: [list]. Nice-to-haves: [list]. Salary: [range]. Location/hybrid: [details]. Plain [British] English. Under 350 words. Remove jargon, gendered words and unnecessary requirements (like years of experience where skills will do). Flag anything that could be discriminatory with [CHECK] and a one-line reason. Do not decide whether any requirement is lawful.
✓ Check before you send
- Requirements are genuine for the role.
- No age, gender or other protected characteristic preferences.
- Salary is included where you can.
- Every [CHECK] item was reviewed with the hiring manager.
UK notes extra
- England, Scotland and Wales: GOV.UK says it is against the law to treat someone less favourably because of a personal characteristic such as religion, sex, gender reassignment or age, and that discrimination can include not hiring someone. This job does not decide whether an ad is lawful. GOV.UK: employers, preventing discrimination.
- Northern Ireland has separate equality law: the Equality Act 2010 mostly does not extend there (section 217). legislation.gov.uk: Equality Act 2010, section 217 (extent).